‘All citizens have their ‘departure’ date tattooed on their arm.’ Terry reviews #Ya #Dystopia Departures by @EJWenstrom

Today’s team review is from Terry. She blogs here https://terrytylerbookreviews.blogspot.co.uk/

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Terty has been reading Departures by E. J. Wenstrom

4 out of 5 stars


I adored the premise of this book – it is set way into the future, after devastating wars, in a part of the world ruled by the ‘Directorate’.  Here, citizens live in environmentally safe domes called Quads, where every aspect of their lives is observed, every move they make controlled by their governors.  


To an extent, I saw this situation as a clever take on a world that could be waiting for us: the mildest physical or mental ill health is to be feared, free speech is not an option and the primary objective is safety for all.  No risk taking, no individuality, no strong ideals to make a stand for.  In the Quads, extremes of emotion are not allowed, and grief is treated with medication – which brings me to the title of the book.  All citizens have their ‘departure’ (death) date tattooed on their arm.  Many will live for over a century, but others are allowed far less time on this earth. Evie doesn’t know why she is to die at aged seventeen, but, as with every other custom in the Quads, the ‘departure’ procedure is presented as a kindness; the Directorate wishes to spare the individual any pain or discomfort.


Full compliance is essential; any diversion from the official line, from the prescribed behaviour, is not tolerated.  


‘The Directorate would do whatever was necessary to placate its citizens.  There would be an explanation.  A distraction.  And then life would move forward.  A few might question it all for a bit, but the tug of a content, easy life would ultimately lull them back into line.  Because, I realise, here’s the kicker: what most people want is not to trust their government.  It’s not to build a better world.  All they want is to be comfortable … and with a sickening twist to my stomach, I realise that I am one of them.’

The problem with Evie’s Departure ceremony is not only that she doesn’t know why she must die when her life has hardly begun. Her departure doesn’t happen as it should. She lives. She is one of the few for whom the euthanasia medication doesn’t work.


The book alternates between the points of view of Evie, as she finds herself outside the Quads in a strange world that isn’t supposed to exist, and her sister Gracelynn, who is confused, hurting over the loss of her sister, and beginning to wonder if their lives are based on lies.  The writing itself is clear and effective, and the compelling plot line flows along.  Evie and Gracelynn’s discoveries come to light gradually, with truths unravelling at just the right pace.  


For the first half of the book, Evie and Gracelynn’s personalities were well-defined, very different, but as the action ramps up they become more alike.  This novel is YA, not usually my genre of choice as I have not been a young adult for decades, but I couldn’t resist the plot.  I felt this was right for the younger end of the YA range; I can imagine liking it when I was about fourteen but finding it a bit too simplistic when older.


I would have liked some sort of explanation about where in the world this was supposed to take place; as this is a couple of hundred years or more into the future, it could be that the author envisions a world in which the countries as we know them no longer exist – fair enough.  There is a little background information, but I would have liked more, and to know how large an area the Quads are supposed to cover, as well as how big they are – I couldn’t imagine them.  The only other problems I had with it were a) overuse of the word ‘goofy’,  and b) the malfunctioning euthanasia process – even now, there exists the means to put people to death quickly and effectively, so it seems unlikely that in a couple of centuries’ time they would still be making errors.  However, any books of this genre require some belief suspension here and there, and this didn’t bother me too much.  Not as much as all the goofy grins, anyway, or ‘Jeeze’ being spelled ‘Geez’ (as an expression of annoyance, it’s short for ‘Jesus’) – repetitions and misspellings are something we all do, but these should have been picked up by the editor.


Departures is a stand-alone, though I imagine there is more to come; I liked the rather uncertain ending (no spoilers!), particularly Gracelynn’s outcome.  E J Wenstrom has created a spookily plausible future world, and I’d certainly be interested in seeing what happens next.

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Tonight, seventeen-year-old Evalee is scheduled to die.

She’s planned her celebration for weeks, and other than leaving her sister Gracelyn behind, she’s ready. The Directorate says this is how it should be, and she trusts them, as all its citizens do. So tonight she dresses up, she has a party, and she dances. Then she goes to sleep for the last time … except, the next morning, Evalee wakes up.

Gracelyn is a model Directorate citizen with a prodigious future ahead. If she could only stop thinking about the shuffling from Evalee’s room on her departure morning. Even wondering if something went wrong is treasonous enough to ruin her. If she pulls at the thread, the entire careful life the Directorate set for her could unravel into chaos.

Swept away by rebels, Evalee must navigate a future she didn’t count on in a new, untidy world. As the Directorate’s lies are stripped away, she becomes determined to break Gracelyn free from its grasp—before Gracelyn’s search for the truth proves her to be more unruly than she’s worth to the Directorate.

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Rosie’s #BookReview Team #RBRT #CliFi SINGULARITY SYNDROME by Susan Kuchinskas #TuesdayBookBlog

Today’s team review is from Terry, she blogs here https://terrytylerbookreviews.blogspot.co.uk/

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Terry has been reading Singularity Syndrome by Susan Kuchinskas

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4.5 stars

‘Finder’ is back, complete with dog/bird chimera The Parrott, and human/baboon Altima, as he uncovers a venture capitalist’s plan to rule the world by AI, making humans compliant by means of a nutritional energy drink. The idea that AI could eventually overtake humans is one I’ve read a fair bit about, also that its integration with humans (Numans, in this book) could be the next stage in our evolution. I find this hellish in the extreme, and it makes me glad I was born when I was.

We don’t know exactly when the book is set, but I imagine it is probably in about a hundred years’ time; Finder mentions helicopters being used in the wars of ‘the last century’. The state of the planet (the Big Change) is revealed to be not only down to the slow deterioration of climate change, but another disaster. I enjoyed the plot, but what I liked reading about most about is Finder himself, a most engaging character, and the world-building elements. Although the story paints a grim picture of human life in the future, it is not without a certain light touch that I wouldn’t exactly call humour; it’s more pathos mixed with astute observations, and off-the-wall characters.

In this book we find out a bit more about Finder’s life when he was younger, including his real name; I like the way his character is slowly building, and I’d love to read more about what has happened between now and the time in which the book is set – more background.

Having read the notes at the back, I know Ms Kuchinskas is well-informed about her subject matter, and this is evident; it is imaginative, clever and extremely well-written.  I’d definitely recommend it to fans of ‘cli-fi’, but you should read Chimera Catalyst first. I liked this more than the first book, and hope there will be more!

Book description

All humans have a complex colony of microorganisms living in our guts. This microbiome influences our health, our thinking and our moods. If you can change someone’s microbiome, can you control their thoughts?

That’s the plan of Thom Elliott, a power-mad tech titan who wants to create a new world order where humanity is ruled by Sekai, the most powerful artificial intelligence ever created. His weapon is Glorp, a nutritional energy drink beloved by the tech community that secretly includes genetically engineered microbes to transform human gut flora.

Finder is a brilliant detective who hates people. He might agree with Elliott that an AI could do a better job of running the world. But when Finder’s own microbiome is contaminated with Elliott’s brew, it’s up to him and his chimera sidekicks to stop him.

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Rosie’s #BookReview Team #RBRT The Buried Few by M.J Lau @YesTHATMattLau #SciFi #Dystopia

Today’s team review is from Terry, she blogs at http://terrytylerbookreviews.blogspot.co.uk/

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Terry has been reading The Buried Few by M.J. Lau

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THE BURIED FEW by M J Lau

3.5 out of 5 stars

The Buried Few is set in 2030, when wars have left many children in America without parents.  Adults can be ‘Creators’, ie, give birth to children, which means being watched at all times, or ‘Guardians’: adoptive parents.  There are many rules governing the status of the parent and their suitability.  Unclaimed children face an uncertain future, to be shipped off to other countries where they may be adopted, or drift from orphanage to orphanage until adulthood.  

Daniel, a computer security specialist, has a broken relationship with Renee, as there are stumbling blocks about their parental future.  He finds an abandoned baby he wants to keep as his own, which sets the couple down a difficult path as they come up against Gozzum, a government agent who has his own issues after a turbulent childhood.

There was much I liked about this book, but I think it needs the hand of an experienced editor.  The beginning was the weakest area and seemed disjointed; if I hadn’t been reading it for the purpose of reviewing, I’d have abandoned it, which would have been a shame, because I soon began to like it much more.  It starts with a long prologue told from the point of view of Raina, a small child, containing scenes from her imaginary world that had no bearing on the actual plot; to me, this was as pointless as detailed dream sequences, and not the stuff of which reader-hooking openings are made.  Then the novel proper begins: we meet Daniel.  We see him meeting Renee, then finding the abandoned baby.  I found the first 15% confusing, with little explanation, so I could only guess at what was going on, though I enjoyed some excellent character cameos (feedback for author: Selah and J!).

The ‘world-building’ continued to be sketchy, and it took until at least 30% before I was clear about the whole parent-child situation (and even then I wasn’t quite sure).  However, so much of the characterisation is extremely good, the dialogue is excellent, for the most part, and some passages I loved (feedback for author: the ‘typical tale of heartbreak.  Boy meets girl at flash mob’, etc, and the backstory about Gozzum’s father).  There are many beautifully descriptive sentences, but maybe too many.  Sometimes, they held up the plot.

New characters are brought in at regular intervals, and there was a lot to keep in my head as it was not clear at first how they all linked up.  I loved the story of Ten, a Native American, and I particularly liked M J Lau’s ideas about the fate of her people.  There are some good observations later on about how the government uses the internet to collect data about the population, how/why the population give it up willingly, and that if they have enough opportunity to ‘vent’ on social media, they are less likely to actually do anything about social injustices; so, so right, and enough said.  Suffice to say that the author and I are singing from the same hymn sheet.

To sum up: there is no doubt that M J Lau can write, but I think he needs to learn when less can be more.  My opinion is that this is a good novel that could have been much better; it’s all there, it just needs restructuring.

Book Description

Work, home, repeat. Daniel Allingham, a computer security specialist, led a very routine life – until one evening, on his way home from work, he found a baby abandoned in a park.

But it gets worse. Daniel lives in a future America where a series of protracted wars have claimed the lives of a generation of parents. The result: a massive foster state, with most children being raised by relatives, friends of family, or in some cases complete strangers. At the behest of the public, the government has mandated that all children must be produced by certified Creators and adopted by registered Guardians. This means that children with no pedigree, like the one Daniel finds in the park, face deportation – or possibly destruction.

Pursued by a relentless government agent, Daniel and his friends fight to secure a better life for one child… risking their own welfare in the process.

About the author

M.J. Lau

M. J. Lau is an English teacher by day and an author by night… or rather, a teacher day and night, and an author whenever he gets a free minute in between. His first novel, The Buried Few, is a work of near-future speculative fiction influenced in equal parts by dystopian classics, fatherhood, and Wired Magazine.

Lau is currently working on the first installment of a fantasy series, with an anticipated release of March 2018.

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