‘All citizens have their ‘departure’ date tattooed on their arm.’ Terry reviews #Ya #Dystopia Departures by @EJWenstrom

Today’s team review is from Terry. She blogs here https://terrytylerbookreviews.blogspot.co.uk/

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Terty has been reading Departures by E. J. Wenstrom

4 out of 5 stars


I adored the premise of this book – it is set way into the future, after devastating wars, in a part of the world ruled by the ‘Directorate’.  Here, citizens live in environmentally safe domes called Quads, where every aspect of their lives is observed, every move they make controlled by their governors.  


To an extent, I saw this situation as a clever take on a world that could be waiting for us: the mildest physical or mental ill health is to be feared, free speech is not an option and the primary objective is safety for all.  No risk taking, no individuality, no strong ideals to make a stand for.  In the Quads, extremes of emotion are not allowed, and grief is treated with medication – which brings me to the title of the book.  All citizens have their ‘departure’ (death) date tattooed on their arm.  Many will live for over a century, but others are allowed far less time on this earth. Evie doesn’t know why she is to die at aged seventeen, but, as with every other custom in the Quads, the ‘departure’ procedure is presented as a kindness; the Directorate wishes to spare the individual any pain or discomfort.


Full compliance is essential; any diversion from the official line, from the prescribed behaviour, is not tolerated.  


‘The Directorate would do whatever was necessary to placate its citizens.  There would be an explanation.  A distraction.  And then life would move forward.  A few might question it all for a bit, but the tug of a content, easy life would ultimately lull them back into line.  Because, I realise, here’s the kicker: what most people want is not to trust their government.  It’s not to build a better world.  All they want is to be comfortable … and with a sickening twist to my stomach, I realise that I am one of them.’

The problem with Evie’s Departure ceremony is not only that she doesn’t know why she must die when her life has hardly begun. Her departure doesn’t happen as it should. She lives. She is one of the few for whom the euthanasia medication doesn’t work.


The book alternates between the points of view of Evie, as she finds herself outside the Quads in a strange world that isn’t supposed to exist, and her sister Gracelynn, who is confused, hurting over the loss of her sister, and beginning to wonder if their lives are based on lies.  The writing itself is clear and effective, and the compelling plot line flows along.  Evie and Gracelynn’s discoveries come to light gradually, with truths unravelling at just the right pace.  


For the first half of the book, Evie and Gracelynn’s personalities were well-defined, very different, but as the action ramps up they become more alike.  This novel is YA, not usually my genre of choice as I have not been a young adult for decades, but I couldn’t resist the plot.  I felt this was right for the younger end of the YA range; I can imagine liking it when I was about fourteen but finding it a bit too simplistic when older.


I would have liked some sort of explanation about where in the world this was supposed to take place; as this is a couple of hundred years or more into the future, it could be that the author envisions a world in which the countries as we know them no longer exist – fair enough.  There is a little background information, but I would have liked more, and to know how large an area the Quads are supposed to cover, as well as how big they are – I couldn’t imagine them.  The only other problems I had with it were a) overuse of the word ‘goofy’,  and b) the malfunctioning euthanasia process – even now, there exists the means to put people to death quickly and effectively, so it seems unlikely that in a couple of centuries’ time they would still be making errors.  However, any books of this genre require some belief suspension here and there, and this didn’t bother me too much.  Not as much as all the goofy grins, anyway, or ‘Jeeze’ being spelled ‘Geez’ (as an expression of annoyance, it’s short for ‘Jesus’) – repetitions and misspellings are something we all do, but these should have been picked up by the editor.


Departures is a stand-alone, though I imagine there is more to come; I liked the rather uncertain ending (no spoilers!), particularly Gracelynn’s outcome.  E J Wenstrom has created a spookily plausible future world, and I’d certainly be interested in seeing what happens next.

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Tonight, seventeen-year-old Evalee is scheduled to die.

She’s planned her celebration for weeks, and other than leaving her sister Gracelyn behind, she’s ready. The Directorate says this is how it should be, and she trusts them, as all its citizens do. So tonight she dresses up, she has a party, and she dances. Then she goes to sleep for the last time … except, the next morning, Evalee wakes up.

Gracelyn is a model Directorate citizen with a prodigious future ahead. If she could only stop thinking about the shuffling from Evalee’s room on her departure morning. Even wondering if something went wrong is treasonous enough to ruin her. If she pulls at the thread, the entire careful life the Directorate set for her could unravel into chaos.

Swept away by rebels, Evalee must navigate a future she didn’t count on in a new, untidy world. As the Directorate’s lies are stripped away, she becomes determined to break Gracelyn free from its grasp—before Gracelyn’s search for the truth proves her to be more unruly than she’s worth to the Directorate.

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Crazy House by James Patterson @arrowpublishing #YA #Dystopia #SundayBlogShare

Crazy HouseCrazy House by James Patterson
My rating: 3 of 5 stars

Three Point Five Stars.

Crazy House is a young adult dystopia horror story. Twins Cassie and Rebecca (Becca) Greenfield live in an agricultural cell, under the umbrella of the ‘United’. They live on their smallholding alone; their mother was taken away for ‘mood-adjustment’ and never returned. Their father tried to take his own life and is slowly dying in a bed at Healthcare United.

We soon learn that Becca has disappeared, as have other children from the cell. Whilst desperately searching for her, Cassie is approached by Nate, who tells her of a rebel group the ‘Outsiders’. He opens her eyes to how controlling life in the cell is, and explains plans to expose the brainwashing regime of the ‘United’.

The dystopia genre is mostly set in challenging or bad places, often controlled by a totalitarian state and this book fits well. It does contain some violent scenes which may not be suitable for younger readers. There were a few instances when the severity of injuries and the character’s following actions were a little questionable, but for the sake of the pacing of the book I can see why they were written this way.

Recommended for readers who are interested in this genre, I can see this as being book one of a series.

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Book Description

No one gets out alive.
Seventeen-year-old Becca Greenfield was snatched from her home and thrown without reazon into a hellish prison known as the Crazy House. To avoid execution, she’s told to shut her mouth and keep her head down.
Becca was never really good at either.
Her only hope for survival is for her sister, Cassie, to find her—that the “good twin” will stop following the rules and start breaking them, before it’s too late. Because the jailers at Crazy House soon discover they made a mistake that could get both sisters killed…

About the author

James Patterson

James Patterson has created more enduring fictional characters than any other novelist writing today with his Alex Cross, Michael Bennett, Women’s Murder Club, Private, NYPD Red, Daniel X, Maximum Ride, and Middle School series. As of January 2016, he has sold over 350 million books worldwide and currently holds the Guinness World Record for the most #1 New York Times bestsellers. In addition to writing the thriller novels for which he is best known, he also writes children’s, middle-grade, and young-adult fiction and is also the first author to have #1 new titles simultaneously on the New York Times adult and children’s bestsellers lists.

The son of an insurance salesman and a schoolteacher, Patterson grew up in Newburgh, New York, and began casually writing at the age of nineteen. In 1969, he graduated from Manhattan College. He was given a full ride to Vanderbilt University’s graduate program in English but dropped out after a year, knowing that he wouldn’t be able to continue reading and writing for pleasure if he became a college professor.

Instead, he moved to New York to become a junior copywriter for the advertising agency J. Walter Thompson, eventually becoming CEO of its North American company.

In 1976, while still working for J. Walter Thompson, Patterson published his first novel, The Thomas Berryman Number, with Little, Brown and Company. After being turned down by thirty-one publishers, it won the Edgar Award for Best First Novel. Patterson’s 1993 novel, Along Came a Spider, his first novel to feature Alex Cross, was also his first New York Times bestseller in fiction.

In 2001, Morgan Freeman starred as Alex Cross in a film adaptation of Along Came a Spider, and Tyler Perry also played the character in the 2012 film Alex Cross. A film adaptation of Patterson’s middle-grade novel Middle School: The Worst Years of My Life will be released in theaters in October 2016.

For his initiatives to help kids become passionate readers and for his philanthropic efforts, Patterson was awarded the National Book Foundation’s 2015 Literarian Award for Outstanding Service to the American Literary Community.

James Patterson has donated more than one million books to students, emphasizing some of the most under-resourced schools and youth programs in the country. In 2015, Patterson donated $1.75 million to school libraries throughout the United States, and $250,000 in holiday bonuses to individual bookstore employees. He also gave $1 million to independent bookstores in 2014.

Patterson has recently donated over $26 million to his and his wife’s alma maters—the University of Wisconsin, Vanderbilt University, and Manhattan College—and he has established over four hundred Teacher Education Scholarships at twenty-four colleges and universities throughout the country. Patterson has also donated over 650,000 books to U.S. soldiers at home and overseas.

In May 2015, Patterson launched a new children’s book imprint at Little, Brown, called JIMMY Patterson, that is unwaveringly focused on one goal: turning kids into lifelong readers. This imprint also provides resources, strategies, and programs to serve teachers, parents, librarians, and booksellers. Patterson will be investing proceeds from the sales of JIMMY Patterson Books in pro-reading initiatives.

Patterson has also founded ReadKiddoRead.com, a website designed to help parents, teachers, and librarians ignite a new generation’s excitement for reading.

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