Rosie’s #Bookreview team #RBRT DEADLY ALLIANCE by @RowlandKathleen

Today’s second team review is from Judith, she blogs at http://judithbarrowblog.com/

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Judith has been reading Deadly Alliance by Kathleen Rowland

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If you read the blurb before beginning this book , I think it tells too much; it’s a while before we learn Less is still alive. I would have liked that to remain a secret until the story evolved more. There are two excellent plots running parallel in the book that Kathleen Rowland juggles expertly; one of fraud and one of terrorism and crime. They are good, though complicated plot-lines that keeps the reader on their toes. Added to that are the various sub-plots; of Les and the familial complicated lives of Finn’s step family.

When I first started to read Deadly Alliance I instantly liked both the protagonists, Amy Kintyre and Finn Donahue.  Good rounded characters, portrayed as ambitious and strong.  I looked forward to following their story. and we learn a lot of their back story without any information dumping.

And the many brilliant secondary characters are also given depth and personalities.

The story is told from an omniscient narrator’s point of view who dips into each character so that we can follow the train of thought from both Amy and Finn. My problem here was that sometimes the lines blurred and I had to go back and re-read to check who I was following. And, once or twice, the author gave the point of view from a minor character. Now this last point is a personal one; I like the points of view separate; to be told the story in different time lines or chapters. If, as a reader, I’m to look into a character’s head, I want them to have more input, even to have equal input. But, as I’ve said, this is purely a personal preference.

My other problems were phrases and the dialogue. And again this could be the difference between the UK and USA perspectives. Or I didn’t quite ‘get’ the genre. I don’t know. I just found some of the phrases and descriptions from the omniscient narrator of the characters’ body language and actions were over-explained and laboured. I just couldn’t picture them, or they seemed unrealistic. This was in some of the ordinary scenes, the fight scenes and the sex scenes.  With reference to the sex scenes I have read many and they never offend. It wasn’t that; I only mean that, from my point of view, there was too much emphasis on them and the sexual innuendos; they were too overtly erotic compared with the rest of the book. And they detracted from the two strong plot-lines. I would have preferred them to be more subtle. And the fight scenes, although described blow by blow, felt strangely detached in their commentary.

And I found both Amy and Finn’s dialogue, internal and spoken,sometimes clichéd and grating; they read oddly for me; quick fire comments such as  “curse a blue streak” and ” third- wheel nervousness” interspersed with each of the characters’ dialogue, took me right out of the story; suspended disbelief in other words. I felt this to be a shame. But … as I said, this could perhaps be the difference between a reader in the UK and one in the USA.

Very much on the plus side are the brilliant descriptions of the various settings that the author give us. The scenes in Burlie’s Jazz Club, the various outdoors scenarios, the houses, the cabin, the weather, the pontoon boat scenes; all are full of evocative imagery; all give a true sense of place.

I was glad that, towards the ending, there was resolution for Amy’s original plans; that the author returned to the first scenes of the book. It brought about a sense of resolution. In fact there was a couple of lovely scenes towards the end that resolved quite a lot for nearly all of the characters. I enjoyed those.

 And then there was the twist at the end. It felt a little rushed but it was a good denouement.

 Find a copy here:

Amazon.co.uk:http://amzn.to/1WSqIH2

Amazon.com: http://amzn.to/1OV78qH

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17 thoughts on “Rosie’s #Bookreview team #RBRT DEADLY ALLIANCE by @RowlandKathleen

  1. Thanks, Judith. Great review. I guess it must be difficult sometimes to keep the balance between the different elements in these types of stories

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  2. Can’t stand head-hopping ~ I remember saying in an article with advice for debut authors that part of the skill of writing a novel is deciding which POV to make a scene from; it doesn’t work to keep chopping and changing into different heads, you need to work out another effective way of making the thoughts or perceived thoughts of other characters work. Sounds like this one needs a bit of a rethink and edit to make the most of its potential – a very thoughtful and considered review, Judith!

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  3. A fair and balanced review, Judith. Agree with your observations regarding how to handle viewpoint. Other authors might have a different opinion, however!

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