Rosie’s Book Review Team #RBRT Alison reviews The Relationship Shoppe by Susan Paulson Clark

Today we have a review from Alison, she blogs at alisonwilliamswriting.wordpress.com

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Alison chose  to read and review The Relationship Shoppe by Susan Paulson Clark

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Marian and Belle run a business selling self-help/relationship books through a website that also offers advice to those going through relationship difficulties. They have their own problems – both having recently divorced. Belle comes from a dysfunctional family, and Marian has too young children to care for. The book focuses mostly on Marian and her journey from struggling single mom to potentially finding fulfilment in both her business and personal lives.

It’s a good idea for a contemporary novel and is full of characters and events that lots of women will no doubt identify with. However, I found it hard to really like the characters. Marian seemed rather judgemental, of herself as well as of others and her ‘turning the other cheek’ philosophy annoyed me. She allowed herself to be treated badly, ignoring her ex’s rude comments and jibes from Belle, supposedly because it made her a better person and was a way of dealing with conflict. I wanted her to lose her temper once in a while, to bite back and say what she was really feeling – to be human. I found her very hard to identify with, which made it difficult to care about what happened to her, which is a shame because she has real potential as a character.

I also felt that the book wasn’t quite ready. There are elements that need work. There is a lot of unnecessary back and forth. There were also issues with the timeline of the novel and events being mentioned out of the blue (Belle going away on holiday with Stefan for example). There were also too many convenient aspects; Marian just seemed to meet people who could help her – something that doesn’t happen all that often in reality.

Susan Paulson Clark can write and there are some very good aspects to this – a cast of characters that have the potential to be extremely entertaining and a great idea for a storyline. But unfortunately, it’s just not quite there yet.

3 out of 5 stars.

Find a copy here from Amazon.co.uk or Amazon.com

Rosie’s Book Review Team #RBRT Terry reviews The Relationship Shoppe by Susan P Clark

Today we have a review from team member Terry, she blogs at http://terrytylerbookreviews.blogspot.co.uk/

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Terry chose to read and review The Relationship Shoppe by Susan Paulson Clark

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THE RELATIONSHIP SHOPPE by Susan Paulson Clark

3.5 stars

Marian Sheffield and her friend Belle start a website and bookshop based around self-help for people suffering relationship difficulties and break-ups.  In the meantime, though, they are both working through their own post-divorce transitional periods, and coming to terms with single life and meeting new men.  Central also to the story is a singles’ group, the structure of which I have to say I found rather odd, but this might be just because of cultural differences between England and Texas, where the book is set.

I found this book to be written in an easily readable, conversational fashion, with many elements in it to which women might relate.  I liked the way in which the story is half love stuff and half business, the latter of which I found interesting.  Ms Clark writes well, and the book is professionally presented with minimal errors.  Some of the characters are cleverly drawn: the volatile Belle, her horrible father, and the hilarious Agnes—the slightly nutty middle-aged woman who isn’t able to move on from her marriage break-up that happened years and years previously.   Some good comedic moments there!  The character that didn’t work for me, though, was Marian.  Sadly, I couldn’t ‘see’ her at all.  Much of the time she comes across as a tad sanctimonious and too set in her expectations of people for a girl in her twenties.  Alas, her understanding of others seems to come mostly from the pages of the books she sells; I wasn’t sure if this was done on purpose or not.

Generally, I felt the book needed a good content edit.  There is a fair bit of unnecessary activity at the beginning; Belle’s walking out of the business then walking back in, and an unrealistic scene in which Marian walks out of her job to work full time on Stairstepz; a single woman with children to support, walking out of a well-paid job because of a remark made by her boss.  Okay, it happens!  But there are too many coincidences—a chance meeting with someone in a café who’s perfectly placed to help her, a friend’s son who just happens to invest in new technology businesses—too many developments and characters’ reactions that were not particularly feasible but just there to move the plot along, sometimes to the point of being contradictory to what’s been said before.  However, this is often to be found in debut novels, and something that lessened as the book went on.

I did guess who Marian was going to end up with very early on in the book though I don’t think it was glaringly obvious, and I found the whole attitude towards relationships a little old-fashioned but, again, this might be just cultural differences.  To sum up, it’s a novel with a lot of potential by someone who clearly has the ability to write engagingly; it just needs a bit of sorting out!

Find a copy here from Amazon.co.uk or Amazon.com