Entwined Within the Darkness by Charley Black
My rating: 3 of 5 stars
3.5 stars
Entwined Within The Darkness is a paranormal romance and the first book in a series.
Patience is a talented witch who knows very little about her past. She shares a flat with her best friend Michael, a half-demon, and she works in a wonderful magical bookshop.
On a night out, Patience and Michael go to a Vampire club. Passion and death threats result; Michael bonds with his vampire lover but locks the duo in a dangerous coma. Meanwhile, Patience and Lucius, an infamous witch-hunter, must join forces to save Michael and his mate.
What I liked:
I liked Patience’s witch skills and particularly the bookshop where she worked. I enjoyed the worlds created and the general plot. There were several secondary characters who were also well written and likeable. The first third of the story was very enjoyable.
What I didn’t like so much:
After the first third the story felt a little rushed, a lot more characters were introduced, but they weren’t as rounded as the initial ones. As the story progressed, I felt that Patience lost some of her original finesse as a talented witch while the sexual tug-of-war between her and Lucius became predictable. The ending was odd; I felt that the plot twist did not quite gel with the rest of the storyline.
There is a good story here, and the first part of the book really was entertaining. For me, the latter parts needed more work to maintain the uniqueness of the main characters and to keep the plot fresh.
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Book description
A NEW STEAMY ENEMIES TO LOVERS PARANORMAL ROMANCE.
A witch, searching for her past, and the witch hunter, determined to kill her.
50 years and she still has no idea who she is.
A witch on a quest to find her past and the key to unlocking her memories.
Burdened by dreams and nightmares that are connected but she cannot remember.
Tormented night after night by the same red eyes.
Waking from another nightmare and sensing new energy in the air, unsure if it is a good or bad omen, Patience decides to let fate take over. A night of fun descends into chaos when she steps through the doors of the Moarte never expecting her best friend, Michael, to begin his transition into a full demon or to have his soul become tethered to the vampire he had been dancing with.
Discovering the vampire’s brother is THE Ragana Zidikas, an infamous witch hunter, she must fight the undeniable attraction between them as they team up to find a soul gem that will give her the power to untether the bond before Michael consumes the vampire’s soul and the Witch Hunter kills her. Can she save her friend in order to save herself, or will the Witch Hunter prove to be her undoing?
Entwined is the first in the Within the Darkness Trilogy and it will end on a cliffy but not for long. An enemies to lovers story with plenty of action, humor, and steam. Stay tuned to read upcoming books in this trilogy! WARNING: Intended for 18+ readers.
This sounds good overall. I’ve enjoyed a few witch stories.
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I appreciate your insight and honesty, Rosie!
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Thank you.
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Ahhh love a good, honest review! 🙂 So do you plan to read the other books in the series then?
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Hard question – as a reader no, because I wasn’t gripped by book one. As a beta reader, I would, so that if similar issues occurred I could get my point across to the author before publishing, so that they have a choice about making changes should they agree with my thoughts.
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