Rosie’s #BookReview Team #RBRT HELL HOLES by @DonFiresmith #Paranormal #Fantasy

Today’s team review is from Terry, she blogs at http://terrytylerbookreviews.blogspot.co.uk/

#RBRT Review Team

Terry has been reading Hell Holes by Donald Firesmith

HELL HOLES by Donald Firesmith

4 out of 5 stars

Reviewed by me as a member of Rosie Amber’s Book Review Team

Mostly, I enjoyed this. It’s very much escapist genre fiction, which could have done with a better edit to rectify repetitions and a few lazily constructed sentences, but I did like it. It’s about geological scientist Jack Oswald who goes out to Alaska with his wife and two of his grad students, to investigate the appearance of mysterious holes in the tundra. Also along for the ride is enigmatic journalist Aileen O’Connor.

Once at camp, all hell is let loose as demonic beings appear from the depths of the mysterious craters. Very quickly, the situation grows from horrendous to super-horrendous.

The author has obviously done his geological research, to the extent of the dialogue being a bit on the information-heavy side in the first half of the book, but if the information is interesting I don’t mind, and this was. It cracks on at a great pace thereafter. At first I was a little put off by the sudden change from feasible arctic geological mystery thriller to Harry Potter-like spells and gargoyles the size of lions, but once I got used to it (pretty quickly), it kind of worked. The action was fast, convincing and scary. Do bear in mind that I’m not a great lover of supernatural; I don’t imagine that this will be any sort of problem for those who are used to reading this genre, in fact you’ll probably love it.

The book turned out to be only long novella length, or certainly very short novel, as it suddenly ends at about 80%, with a humdinger of a cliffhanger. The rest of the book is taken up with information about the series, notes about the inspiration for the book, and part of Book Two. Now, I didn’t understand the ‘part of Book Two’ thing AT ALL. Some people don’t like parts of series ending in a cliffhanger. I do, I love it. This cliffhanger was so good that all I wanted to do was find out what happened next, to the extent that I would have gone straight to Amazon and bought the next one if it was available, which is, surely, the purpose of such endings. So why, Mr Firesmith, have you given me a reason not to, by sticking ‘what happened next’ at the back of Book One? Think on!

My other complaint is about the diagrams at the beginning of the book. Placed there, they meant little. If the diagram for Pump Station 2 was placed right at the start of, or in the middle of, the chapter when the group arrive there, it would have given me all the information I needed, instead of me having to imagine it/keep flicking back to the start. The Alaska map could have been better placed, too.

I give this book a thumbs up, despite the criticisms. If you like arctic landscapes and demonic thrills, I suggest you nip over to Amazon and download it immediately.

Book Description

A geologist, his climatologist wife, two graduate students, a local newspaper reporter, an oil company representative, and a field biologist travel to one of dozens of huge holes that have mysteriously appeared in the tundra of the North Slope of Alaska. Their mission is to research these strange craters that threaten financial and environmental catastrophe should they open up under the Trans-Alaska Pipeline or any of the many oil wells and smaller pipelines that feed it. Unfortunately, a far worse danger lurks below, one that threatens to destroy all of humanity when it emerges. Who will survive the demonic invasion to flee south towards the safety of Fairbanks?

About the author

Donald G. Firesmith

A geek by day, Donald Firesmith works as a system and software engineer helping the US Government acquire large, complex software-intensive systems. In this guise, he has authored seven technical books, written numerous software- and system-related articles and papers, and spoken at more conferences than he can possibly remember. He’s also proud to have been named a Distinguished Engineer by the Association of Computing Machinery, although his pride is tempered somewhat by his fear that the term “distinguished” makes him sound like a graybeard academic rather than an active engineer whose beard is still slightly more red than gray.

By night and on weekends, his alter ego writes modern paranormal fantasy, apocalyptic science fiction, action and adventure novels and relaxes by handcrafting magic wands from various magical woods and mystical gemstones. His first foray into fiction is the book Magical Wands: A Cornucopia of Wand Lore written under the pen name Wolfrick Ignatius Feuerschmied. He lives in Crafton, Pennsylvania with his wife Becky, and his son Dane, and varying numbers of dogs, cats, and birds.

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10 thoughts on “Rosie’s #BookReview Team #RBRT HELL HOLES by @DonFiresmith #Paranormal #Fantasy

  1. Terry had some good ideas. Based on her review, I moved the maps from the front of the book to where they are most useful, and I also reduced the sneak peak at book 2 to a much shorter preface that did not give the cliff hanger ending away. Book 2 is also considerably longer than book 1.

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    • I’m so pleased that this review was helpful to you, Donald. Although I am in the ‘reviews are for readers, not a critique for authors’ camp, this is not cast in stone, and sometimes I think a bit of constructive ‘suggestion’ can be a good thing. I’ve learnt from some in reviews for my books 🙂

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  2. I agree with all the comments, Terry. Perhaps with the chunk of the next book, he wanted to both reassure those who hate cliffhangers and try to catch the rest (or perhaps he didn’t expect people would necessarily read it…). Although the author offers to send a copy of the next one to anybody who leaves a review… (And he does, in my experience). You’re right about the research. The author told me he has travelled extensively around the area and documented himself. Great review!

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  3. You write well-balanced reviews, Terry–giving the author and the story the “benefit of the doubt,” despite minor flaws. (No book is perfect, right?) You made me want to read the novella, too. Pinned & shared. 🙂

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  4. A very balanced review, Terry. A lot to absorb. Constructive criticism never goes amiss… as Donald has proved. We are all trying to ‘get it right’ as authors and should welcome balanced advice/comments

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